"Broken game console"
Day * 1
One day, when Maria was in college, my friend Carlo told me about a horrible place. Carlo was telling me a story of "Ponte Sisto Place". Carlo said to me Ponte Sisto place looks very beautiful, it's in Italy. Most of the people love to walk through the place seeing the beauty of that place. In evening men were there, they drank a lot.
Stella was going from there by the scooty. They stood in front of her scooty. Then Stella said to them " please leave me alone, let me go to my home" they didn't allow her to go. They did insolence with her, they did rape of her. Stella was requesting them to leave her, but they didn't listen. And they left Stella in bad conditions. Stella was crying too much, thinking what happened with her. After few hours Stella died.
Day * 2
"When everyone used to go from here easily, it used to seems like this"
Whenever someone tried to go from there. Stella's soul tried to stop his/her way. No one could complete that way. Who so ever was kind and was good person, Stella gave them way to go. But it was dangerous for other people. There were many souls good or bad both. If a person was kind and good, then good souls helped them to cross the way.
At night Maria was thinking about the place. Then Maria thought to go there by the next day only.
Maria just wanted to know about that. That's why she went there to get some more information.
Day * 3
"When Stella died. It used to look like this"
Scary.................😰😨
Next day, I was going by the same dangerous way. It was horrible you know, there was nobody. Gradually I was walking, I saw one person was going. His name was Alex, I called him "excuse me" Alex stopped. Then I asked many questions from him like why is it empty? No one is going from here! Then Alex said to me it seems beautiful in the morning, but not at night.
A lot of accident had happened here, that's why it's dangerous. Ponte Sisto's way was like "Broken Game Console" nobody couldn't complete that way. If anyone wanted to complete, they may go into a big problem.
Through out the day that person was with me. And Maria was finding Stella's soul. Maria called Stella's soul "please come in front of me I want to talk to you" but Stella didn't come. Maria just wanted to give justice to Stella. Then suddenly, Alex started talking about himself. Alex shared with Maria that 10 years ago, he died in accident on the same way. Maria got shocked😲. Finally the way got completed and Alex became invisible to Maria.
It became more dangerous place, than it was earlier!
Day * 4
Maria came to home and thinking about the journey. She thought to write a novel on Stella's story. At night Maria started writing on it, she was doing this because of one reason, other people must know about Stella's life. And from the next time, people would not do such things in their life.
Fabulous dear I really enjoyed 😘😘
ReplyDeleteAwesome story . You have followed mostly all the components of plot.
ReplyDeleteWow charu ❤️ I really have no words for you ❤️ The story is really fabulous 😍It has the climax also 🙂 I loved it ❣️ and one more thing I just found one mistake in the day 1 paragraph you wrote " the didn't listen" it should be "they didn't listen ".
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